Night is so bore


Moon is going low

The bitterness of it

Will make me forlorn

Thou the sun will rise soon

But I hate this gloomy moon……


3 thoughts on “Gloominess

  1. Stranger says:

    Despite all the hatred i have with this moon
    i still look up every night and see u for long
    thinking and thinking
    may our glimpse catch this sight incidentally
    thats the view we have in common
    for that common i stare what i hate….

  2. Stranger says:

    lolx though i am not good at literature neither studied it after school but i sometimes like to have a poetic conversation.. was looking for more but u didnt had more… and i would have appreciated more if your reply would have been in the same poetic way 🙂

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